Merry Christmas Poem (check it out)

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This is a poem written by a very close friend of mine she is wanting to know what ppl think of it..if ppl like it she's goingot submit it to readers digest or something like that and other poem places so please tell me your honest options of it wheathe ryou lioved it hated it or indiffrent....



Merry Christmas


Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night

for tommrow our soldier will leave use to fight

and if it so happens he dosn't return

the fate of this soldier is now God's concern

but don't worry mother, he'll be alright

for God loves the people who have the courage to fight

so go to sleep mamma, please don't cry

he knows what he's doing, he knows he might die

Mom, he'll be alright

Just pray the Lord that he'll bless our land

and be with his brothers, who've fallen in the sand

and all this to protect our right to be free,

Lord, let us live in sweet liberty

So Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night

for tommrow our soldiers will leave us to fight

-Mia S.