Merry Christmas Poem (check it out)
This is a poem written by a very close friend of mine she is wanting to know what ppl think of it..if ppl like it she's goingot submit it to readers digest or something like that and other poem places so please tell me your honest options of it wheathe ryou lioved it hated it or indiffrent....
Merry Christmas
Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night
for tommrow our soldier will leave use to fight
and if it so happens he dosn't return
the fate of this soldier is now God's concern
but don't worry mother, he'll be alright
for God loves the people who have the courage to fight
so go to sleep mamma, please don't cry
he knows what he's doing, he knows he might die
Mom, he'll be alright
Just pray the Lord that he'll bless our land
and be with his brothers, who've fallen in the sand
and all this to protect our right to be free,
Lord, let us live in sweet liberty
So Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night
for tommrow our soldiers will leave us to fight
-Mia S.
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